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I want sheets one day past fresh
and enough pillows so nothing
every feels stiff or tweaks apart.

I want the windows open and
the temperature perfect for
Rubix-cube-square touching.

I thought to want Cleopatra's
handmaidens to serve us but the
world is not big enough for us.

I want movies of every moment
like this playing on the ceiling
so we can stay very horizontal.

I want no visitors and cannot
understand that part of Brian
Wilson's seven year plan.

After several of these days, I
want to write a new poem
prescription including innovations.

I want more of Sunday morning.
:blackrose:
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:iconwyn--:
Wyn-- Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
you have a talent for making the mood of the poem stand out. great work :)
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
that is a very helpful comment ... thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. :frail:
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:iconwyn--:
Wyn-- Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
your welcome :)
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:iconeinfachnurich:
einfachnurich Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
A Sunday morning like one you describe in your poem would be so great. I like the atmosphere u created with your words :clap:
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Thank you. It was such a happy wander with words. I appreciate the fave also ... :frail:
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:iconeinfachnurich:
einfachnurich Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
u r welcome :nod:
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Such a delightfully lazy poem!
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Thank you! :frail:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article here: [link] .

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
thank you! :frail:
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:icondailylitdeviations:
DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
It was our pleasure
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
:frail:
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner May 10, 2009   Writer
delightful
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
thank you! :frail:
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cyranosdemet Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
ahhh... I like sunday mornings... well done!
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
thank you!
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:iconwisewanderer:
WiseWanderer Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009
It paints a nice picture of my favourite time of the week :D
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009
Mine, too ... thanks.
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I wholeheartedly relate to the last line!

Very nicely written.:)
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
O la! la! A fave from Maggie! You made my day. :hug:
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Your poem gave me another Sunday!:D
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009
cool.
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
totally. Life should be a string of Sundays.:)
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