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If you should capture
the whole of my last breath,
I will dwell in you
with contentment,

for a portion of a moment.

If you should share
the whole of your next breath,
I will dwell with you
in them, contented still,

for a portion of a moment.

If all should release
the whole of our breaths,
We will dwell everywhere
with all, more content

for all our forevers.
:frail:

On the occasion of my 56th birthday, I miss my mother and daddy and sister very much. But then I inhale and am content.
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AGMeade Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013   Writer
Sometimes there are no words. How beautiful.
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:frail: that made my day :frail:
*** and it was a good day ***
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hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Writer
how beautiful, truly.
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
I was just thinking about you yesterday. But then, no one is surprised by that. Thank you. :frail:
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hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
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writeritalian14 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god..I love your writings! I look up to you now!
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Thanks :frail:
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writeritalian14 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem!
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Cr2O3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
:iconredheart-plz:
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Thanks :frail:
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Cr2O3 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
:)
always
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beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Writer
This is beautiful. :heart:
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thank you! :frail:
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beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012   Writer
:heart:
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alapip Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
DLD! yes! :w00t!:
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thanks, Pip :frail:
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alapip Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it was indeed my pleasure... :)
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Bark Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Congratulations on the well-deserved DLD!
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thanks! :frail:
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thank you! :frail:
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alapip Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is a wonderful sentiment, Who,
much more than just a sentiment.

have a perfect birthday...

:heart:pip
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Thanks, Pip :frail:
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alapip Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you betcha... :nod:
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